ext_25841 ([identity profile] oliviazaratinga.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alanwolfmoon 2008-08-21 10:26 pm (UTC)

Loved that House ended up with the transman instead of Wilson in this story, but that they became friends again. I liked Michaels a lot. The scene in which House broke down was excellent! Loved it. Also adored that you wrote something good for the Ducklings even though House and Wilson were thousands of miles away. That took some creativity. If I had one bit of concrit to give it would be that I would have liked more of a description of Michaels, or more of a reminder. It could be I'm just an oblivious reader when I have no sleep, though.

BTW, my new icon is in your honor since you liked the old one so much, lol.

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