i don't know... this chapter probably seems like it was happening quickly. what i was trying to do was have the last four chapters building, all the stress inside house, all the feelings inside michaels, and all the guilt inside wilson. then everythign was supposed to pop. michaels was supposed to realize house was completely oblivious, wilson was supposed to have his guilt overcome his grief, and house was supposed to hit the breaking point.

i love writting in snippets. when I'm writing them, they have music with them in my head, like that sequence near the end of wilson's heart, showing what's going on with everyone. but, of course, that would be difficult to write.