That feels rushed to me. But maybe because I have a tendency to drag things out to the level of torture. I guess I expected that with what you set up, it would take longer to resolve it.
But I liked the choppy kind of snippets the paragraphs implied. Like we were watching them from a distance or something, like spying on them. I don't know. Does that make sense?
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Date: 2008-08-21 07:55 pm (UTC)But I liked the choppy kind of snippets the paragraphs implied. Like we were watching them from a distance or something, like spying on them. I don't know. Does that make sense?